This is the blog of children's book author and elementary school teacher, Stacy Barnett Mozer. I blog about my own writing journey, the journey of other kidlit authors, my classroom, and talk about books. Thanks for stopping by. Your thoughts are always welcome (and encouraged).

Saturday, November 6, 2010

Learning to Write by Reading (YA Paranormal)

Some writers have told me that they can't read when they are writing, or if they do read it has to be in other genres. I find the opposite to be true. I read in my genre to see for myself what the experts are doing. I read as a writer. And since each story I read is unique with it's own voice, mine should be too.

So here's what I'm reading as I write a Paranormal YA. Some of the books I've read previously, which influenced me to try this genre. Some I read in anticipation. Others I've read as a break from my own paranormal universe. And I'll be honest, I didn't like all of them. But that's part of the learning experience to. I've listed them in chronological order (as in, date I read them)

Twilight Series by Stephanie Meyer
Beautiful Creatures by Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl
Shiver and Linger by Maggie Stiefvater
The Thirteen Treasures by Michelle Harrison
Guardian of the Dead by Karen Healey
Beautiful Darkness by Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl
Wicked Lovely Series by Melissa Marr
Wake and Fade by Lisa McMann
iDrakula by Bekka Black
Birth of a Killer by Darren Shan
Fallen and Torment by Lauren Kate
Low Red Moon by Ivy Devlin
Paranormalcy by Kiersten White
Three Quarters Dead by Richard Peck
Wings and Spells by Aprilynne Pike
The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner by Stephanie Meyer
The Eternal Ones by Kirsten Miller
Slayed by Amanda Marrone
Need by Carrie Jones
Captivate by Carrie Jones
Tantalize by Cynthia Leitich Smith
Eternal by Cynthia Leitich Smith

I think that's all of them. Now off to the library... to get more.

Sunday, February 21, 2010

Interview With Middle Grade Author Laura Toffler-Corrie

Laura Toffler-Corrie is a freelance writer who holds an M.S. in school psychology, as well as an M.F.A. in dramatic writing from New York University, where she also taught writing. She has written for a number magazines including 'Parenting' and 'StoryWorks.' Laura lives in Westchester, New York with her husband, twin daughters and a variety of noisy pets. This is her first novel.

When I first met Laura, she was an aspiring writer. As a great networker, she used her connections to run a number of events for my group, The SCBWI Writers of Lower Fairfield. It's been exciting to know her as she went through this process of getting an agent and finding a home for her book. I hope her experience will inspire you.

How did you come up with the idea to write THE LIFE AND OPINIONS OF AMY FINAWITZ?
Growing up, and into college, my best friend and I used to write each other these letters, in the form of plays, poems, short stories, just for a laugh. They were all about our lives, boys, friends, parents, neighbors. This inspired the letter format for AMY. The character of Beryl came from my experiences with the Chabad, an ultra religious Jewish sect. As far as the historical facts in the book, I stumbled on those, but they’re all true.

Who read your writing before it was published? Do you belong to a critique group?
I enjoy the social aspect of critique groups, but it‘s hard for me to share my unfinished work. Too much feedback (even when it’s intelligent and well meaning) just disrupts my process. I do attend Pat Reilly Giff’s writing workshops at The Dinosaur’s Paw in Fairfield. She’s an amazing teacher and often reads my work aloud to the class. That’s an invaluable, sometimes humbling but usually exhilarating, experience. I would recommend a good workshop to any writer.

I know you have an agent. How did you get her to represent you? What was the process like once you were represented?
I’m repped by Elana Roth at the Caren Johnson Literary Agency. I initially queried an agent at Firebrand Literary Agency, who expressed interest, but his plate was full. Just about this time, Elana joined the agency, so he passed my manuscript to her. It was great kismet for me! She was excited about the book and signed me on. We moved to CJLA and the rest is history. My agent found my editor, the wonderful Nancy Mercado at Roaring Brook Press, MacMillan. Basically, I trusted Elana’s judgment about the match. Then once Nan and I started talking about the book I knew that she was exactly the right person for me and AMY.

What was the process like once you started moving towards publication?
At first, it was a bit scary. You want to make your book the best it can be, you want to please your editor, you fear that she will discover you’re really an imposter and ask for your advance back! Really though, once you start working with your editor, it’s very inspiring. I’ve learned so much. Over the course of the process, I received a few ‘revision letters,’ with all of her suggestions mapped out. It was a useful tool to refer to. But there were phone calls too and emails that went back and forth. Primarily, it’s about mutual respect and communication. You both want the same thing: a great book.

Last question. What do you feel you do best as a writer? What do you need to work on?
I think I'm good at humor and character. I wish I was a bit more disciplined and was more creative in the morning. I’m pokey in the morning. As it stands, I do my best writing later in the day, but then sometimes at night, I’m just fried.

Thank you so much for answering these questions, Laura. I'm looking forward to reading THE LIFE AND OPINIONS OF AMY FINAWITZ when it comes out this Fall of 2010.

For more about Laura and AMY visit her on her website, on
Facebook, or on Twitter.

You can also leave a question for her in the comments. She may stroll by and answer.

Tuesday, January 5, 2010

Interview With YA and Middle Grade Author Sarah Darer Littman

Sarah Darer Littman, writer, mother, and unpaid chauffeur, is a living example of the cliche, "Life Begins at 40." After spending much of her adult life doing things she didn't really plan to, including such diverse occupations as financial analyst and farmer's wife, she at long last found her true calling as a writer. She indulges her adult voice as a columnist for the Stamford Advocate/Greenwich Time newspapers.

Visit her blog or her website.

When did you decide to become a writer?
I wanted to be a writer when I was in high school, but when I thought I would go to college and major in English and write the Great American Novel, the message I got from my parents was "Uh, dude..." (well, actually, they didn't say "dude" because my parents don't speak that way) "How are you going to make a living as an English major?" I didn't have a good answer so I ended up on a completely on a completely different track - Wall St, MBA in Finance and then, believe it or not, living on a dairy farm in rural England and helping to run a cheese making business. But all along, there was this little voice inside me whispering that I should be writing. Finally, a few years before I turned 40, I started listening to that voice. I realized that I didn't want to be in my nursing home at the end of my life thinking "What would have happened if...?" I had to at least try to write, even if it was a total failure. So I started taking some adult ed classes and giving myself time to experiment with it.

How did you go from aspiring writer to published author? Was it luck or hard work?
Hard work, serendipity and research. My first novel for kids, about a runaway school hamster, will never see the light of day, but it was a good practice novel. I also wrote 200 pages of a grown up book that will also probably never see the light of day, at least in its present form, but it helped me develop my skills as a writer. I kept taking classes though, and ultimately went to Writers Week at Manhattanville College, where I was fortunate enough to take a workshop in writing for children with the late great Paula Danziger. I took a chapter of the hamster book, and Paula told me that I had talent, but that I should start something new. It was in her class that I came up with the idea for CONFESSIONS OF A CLOSET CATHOLIC. I went home one night and wrote the first page, came in and showed it to her and she said, "Yes - this is it!"

I wrote the whole book and when I was almost finished with it, I went to my first SCBWI conference in New York. There, I went and listened to several editors talk about their interests. I knew that whoever was going to buy a book about a girl giving up being Jewish for Lent was going to have to have a quirky sense of humor. When I heard Julie Strauss-Gabel speak, the first slide of her presentation was a picture of herself in the high school band, with all these blonde girls playing the flute and herself, frizzy darked haired playing the drums. She said, "This is who is reading your manuscripts". Right then I knew that she was someone I wanted to work with - because my book was all about that kind of girl.

When the book was finished and polished to the best of my ability, I sent it off to her. I also sent it to a friend of mine who worked for Harper Collins in sales who'd offered to read it (they didn't take unagented submissions) saying that if she liked it, maybe she could pass it on and if not, don't feel obligated. And then I sat back, expecting to wait for six months and be rejected by both, because I have such great self esteem ;-)

Three and a half weeks later the phone rang, and it was Julie Strauss-Gabel. I almost couldn't talk, I was so shocked. She asked me if I was willing to make revisions (um, let me think...yes!) and then offered to buy the book. I hung up and started screaming and dancing around the kitchen. My kids thought I'd gone insane!

The serendipity part was that completely unbeknownst to me, Julie had been looking for a book with Jewish content. She'd said so at several conferences and had been inundated with things that didn't work so she'd stopped mentioning it. So she was really happy to find a book that did work.

How did you come up with the idea for your latest novel, LIFE AFTER?

The story of my upcoming book, LIFE, AFTER is an interesting one, because it grew from failure. During my lengthy "second book blues" period, I'd worked on three chapters and an a synopsis for a book called A DIFFERENT DRUMMER, about a boy with Aspergers Syndrome, something that I'm familiar with because my son was diagnosed with it when he was five. We submitted it but my then editor felt it was too much like A CURIOUS INCIDENT OF THE DOG IN THE NIGHTTIME and rejected it. I was dejected, but went back to the drawing board and worked on some new ideas. A few months later, my editor heard the StoryCorps interview my son did of me (broadcast on NPR and called my agent, suggesting that maybe we could revisit the idea for that book, but perhaps from the voice of the sibling of the kid with Aspergers.

I'd just read the ARC of Cynthia Lord's RULES, so I knew that had already been done and done brilliantly. But I started thinking about my own son and how in elementary and middle school, he'd tended to gravitate towards kids from South America, and I wondered if perhaps it was because they too, weren't the "typical American kids" and also had problems with idiomatic speech, although in their case it was because English wasn't their native language. I also wanted to explore something that had frustrated me when 9/11 happened - that it was as if many Americans only then appeared to recognize the existence of terrorism. I'd grown up in England during early 1970's during the IRA bombing campaigns and being aware of terrorist threats was part of our way of life. I have cousins in Israel for whom this continues to be a way of life. It's not that you let it dominate your existence, but you are always vigilant and aware.

So when I picked the South American country for my main character I chose Argentina, because I wanted her to have lost a family member in the bombing of the A.M.I.A. (Jewish Center) that took place in July 1994.

I wrote a synopsis and some sample chapters to apply for a SCBWI WIP grant, but never really connected with my main character. In the end, I went to the Kindling Words retreat, shortly thereafter, and decided to write PURGE instead. This book idea got put in a drawer and probably never would have seen the light of day if it hadn't been for a wonderful woman called Claudette Greene, to whom LIFE, AFTER is dedicated.

About the time I was trying to figure out what to work on for my third book, I met with a local mother/daughter book group that had read CONFESSIONS. It was great fun, and afterwards, Claudette, one of the moms, wrote to thank me. She told me that her daughter had become interested in writing after she lost her dad on 9/11 and asked if I'd ever considered writing a book about it, because there just wasn't anything out there for teens at that point. I took my synopsis out of the drawer and e-mailed it to her and she told me I should write the book. I ended up including it on a list of proposals I gave to my editors at Scholastic and they liked it, but thought it should be YA rather than middle grade. When I went back to the book, having met Claudette and heard her story, I felt so much more of a connection to the main character, and a greater passion for writing the story.

What do you feel you do best as a writer? What do you still need to work on?
I think I've created some great characters. I'd love to learn more about plot and pacing. I'm hoping to get the opportunity to take the Robert McKee Story seminar at some point in the near future. But it's hard to take that time away when you have kids and you're a single mom.

What are you working on now?
I just turned in a manuscript for a book that's coming out from Scholastic Press in 2011 called WANT TO GO PRIVATE? It's about a girl who becomes involved with an Internet predator. That's been the most difficult book I've written so far. My daughter would come home from school and I'd just have written a chat scene between the girl and the predator and I'd say to my daughter: "Stay away from me, I'm a perverted man right now!" It really started to do my head in after a while.

I've also just started something new, but I'm too early in the process to want to talk about it. But it's something different. I'm very excited about it, because I'm always looking to grow as an author. I guess you could say I'm learning on the job!

Thank you so much Sarah for answering these questions. I am looking forward to reading LIFE, AFTER which will be released on July 1, 2010.

Hope you liked the interview. Comment below for a chance to win a signed copy of Purge by Sarah Darer Littman